tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post6939557517561263414..comments2023-05-10T02:18:35.355-07:00Comments on Bruises of the soul...: His hands...Desert Rosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-85558897897625474592010-08-01T13:27:13.578-07:002010-08-01T13:27:13.578-07:00Thank you Pete,glad you liked it..welcome back :)e...Thank you Pete,glad you liked it..welcome back :)enjoy your week,one stop is so fantastic..:) cheers!Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-9539956675039804752010-08-01T13:13:30.829-07:002010-08-01T13:13:30.829-07:00Hi Desert that was a wonderful sensual poem...been...Hi Desert that was a wonderful sensual poem...been away for the week so just catching up now and thanks for taking part in One Shot again..cheers PeteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-58628270408321489942010-07-30T17:36:06.539-07:002010-07-30T17:36:06.539-07:00@Magnus thanks again,it is my pleasure..the least ...@Magnus thanks again,it is my pleasure..the least i can do for such amazing readers who take of their time to come read me and comment..i really appreciate it :)<br /><br />@Gypsy my dear one..thank you for the sweet comment,you know us,we do read the hands and the hearts ..;)<br />love having you always darling..have a great weekend..:)<br /><br />love&hugsDesert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-21409310447989896702010-07-30T14:16:25.733-07:002010-07-30T14:16:25.733-07:00such beautiful words written with the hands of you...such beautiful words written with the hands of your mind - just beautifully done - and the hands - oh, yeah! hands! hands and eyes just speak volumes about someone - at least to me! i don't need words - because i hear the hands and eyes! wonderful piece, lady!GYPSYWOMANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03042621041213415958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-12321326245613310222010-07-29T13:02:08.167-07:002010-07-29T13:02:08.167-07:00Yes the body language is more honest..sometimes we...Yes the body language is more honest..sometimes we have to speak tho, like now :)<br />You're welcome, the same to you, nice when someone reads and comments.<br />You have great day too!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07973476591408100609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-42722544529298196672010-07-29T08:31:23.517-07:002010-07-29T08:31:23.517-07:00What can i say,i am smiling..happy..and yes,sendin...What can i say,i am smiling..happy..and yes,sending you a warm hug way to there..i know you feel it..:)<br /><br />hugs&yummy kisses Nivo!Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-4740901680277313852010-07-29T08:26:46.140-07:002010-07-29T08:26:46.140-07:00Oh my.... I so glad i saw you on nevine's page...Oh my.... I so glad i saw you on nevine's page... you are really something to behold... I must read you. You seem to have a very beautiful soul....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-83429433613140672452010-07-29T07:51:52.327-07:002010-07-29T07:51:52.327-07:00With hands... we touch. With fingers... we embrace...With hands... we touch. With fingers... we embrace... not only skin... but psyche. Your erratic lines, some short, some long, are like the running of fingers over the keys of a piano... a sort of lovemaking of their own. Your thoughts... and observation... keen... and unwavering. This is how we watch when we are obsessed. And who does not wish to be obsessed in desire?<br /><br />Your words are delicious, Abeer... simply DELICIOUS! YUM!<br /><br />NevineNevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-40882729467131540362010-07-29T06:46:49.424-07:002010-07-29T06:46:49.424-07:00Exactly Magnus,the thing is the body language is t...Exactly Magnus,the thing is the body language is the most honest one too,yet we still rely more on words..:)<br />thank you for stopping by,i really appreciate your nice comment..:)<br />have a great day..:)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-86526079548872569422010-07-29T04:34:45.467-07:002010-07-29T04:34:45.467-07:00Very dreamy and sensual...and quite lovely!
Every...Very dreamy and sensual...and quite lovely!<br /><br />Every part of the body can speak volumes, if we just take the to listen.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07973476591408100609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-7972598627740552212010-07-28T18:15:42.352-07:002010-07-28T18:15:42.352-07:00thank you so much Kavita! so happy to have you aro...thank you so much Kavita! so happy to have you around..glad the poem reached you well..:)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-64372850671256726982010-07-28T17:51:25.478-07:002010-07-28T17:51:25.478-07:00Sensuous and lovely!!!
With hints all along, and ...Sensuous and lovely!!! <br />With hints all along, and yet revealed at the end! The artist and his muse - what a pair! Beautiful!!Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-67871794128087933882010-07-28T17:24:07.351-07:002010-07-28T17:24:07.351-07:00That was a tantalizing read!!
Hints throughout th...That was a tantalizing read!! <br />Hints throughout the poem, and then finally revealing that he was an artist and you, the muse...wow...it was awesome! <br />Loved the sensuality in the writing...Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-39292771529880624852010-07-28T12:03:54.268-07:002010-07-28T12:03:54.268-07:00@heavealie thank you so much for your sweet words,...@heavealie thank you so much for your sweet words,sometimes the soul touches you as powerful as the hands do..:)<br /><br />@Claudia thank you dear Claudia,yes they do..indeed..:)<br /><br />@Monkey man so much humbled with your lovely presence,much appreciated..:)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-22943431184876418972010-07-28T11:49:16.866-07:002010-07-28T11:49:16.866-07:00This spoke sensual volumes, yet kept a bit of myst...This spoke sensual volumes, yet kept a bit of mystery. Nice.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-18392220432410976412010-07-28T09:49:47.295-07:002010-07-28T09:49:47.295-07:00.listening to his hands..yes, sometimes hands inde....listening to his hands..yes, sometimes hands indeed reveal a lot more than words...great poem - dreamy..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-65736053180277083982010-07-28T09:20:26.326-07:002010-07-28T09:20:26.326-07:00this piece of seductive in an elegant way.sensual ...this piece of seductive in an elegant way.sensual and serene as well.descriptive piece and I'm sure everyone can relate to it reminding dem of the touch of that someone.nice blog and keep writing.heavealiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05584324709724609146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-21648538307346474482010-07-28T06:46:16.124-07:002010-07-28T06:46:16.124-07:00@Joanny how i Enjoy reading your comments Joanny! ...@Joanny how i Enjoy reading your comments Joanny! you touched the core of it,yes..sign language is how we communicate my muse and i..:) thank you for coming darling..love having you in my sanctuary..:)<br /><br />@Jessie the hands tell stories and reveal what our tongues might not dare to share..:)<br />thank you for the nice comment..:)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-55166250905115657502010-07-28T05:40:21.230-07:002010-07-28T05:40:21.230-07:00the hands, the places they can lesiurely go, the s...the hands, the places they can lesiurely go, the stories they can tell, and the lies they try to hide. beautifully written, lovely description--very vivid.<br /><br />smiles,Jessiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11173809658342411265noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-11182625335582061142010-07-28T05:11:00.814-07:002010-07-28T05:11:00.814-07:00Playful,mysterious, sensual, depicting that powerf...Playful,mysterious, sensual, depicting that powerful connection with the use of some very good descriptives. <br /><br />Your poem has an eloquent tone, and you cleverly weave your magic making that wonderful connection to communication with another through the physical touch , and sign language a perfect metaphor for this poem. <br /><br />Yes, I loved it.<br />Joannyjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-74707690309885026702010-07-28T04:45:33.825-07:002010-07-28T04:45:33.825-07:00@Wild Rose ..my Darling,you know how i love his ha...@Wild Rose ..my Darling,you know how i love his hands too..your comment is too sweet Queen,love you always<br /><br />Hugs tight :)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-62739155127455242592010-07-28T04:44:13.483-07:002010-07-28T04:44:13.483-07:00@Tony single some words penetrate to us,for reason...@Tony single some words penetrate to us,for reasons we might not discover at the time,but later on we feel them resting in our hearts for this is where they were originally meant to be..happy you stopped by,thank you for your sweet words..:)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-40576273733090707742010-07-28T04:35:32.153-07:002010-07-28T04:35:32.153-07:00Rose, you have a way with words here. There is jus...Rose, you have a way with words here. There is just as much left unspoken between the lines as there is in the actual lines! For some reason, these particular lines really spoke to me:<br /><br />"I learned from his running away answers<br />to interrogate his hands<br />to built my own castle in the sands<br />of our childhood game"<br /><br />However, I really cannot articulate why. Perhaps it'll come to me later on... :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-42970127330216266012010-07-28T03:21:49.632-07:002010-07-28T03:21:49.632-07:00His hands, his fingers and his demeanor my most fa...His hands, his fingers and his demeanor my most favorite things about him. He has his way of making us feel special and glad to read this poem lovely queen~<br /><br />xxxWild Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05260455210731142858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-50476373581274630842010-07-28T02:53:52.896-07:002010-07-28T02:53:52.896-07:00@John well i write poetry for my life,i live it ev...@John well i write poetry for my life,i live it every piece takes a part of me there,it is from my heart that it comes out..:) will see your link and i am glad you stopped by,feel free to roam around..thank you for your nice comment..:)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.com