tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post7168007539818267983..comments2023-05-10T02:18:35.355-07:00Comments on Bruises of the soul...: Loud Silence...Desert Rosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-10146714328047513932011-11-21T20:38:18.836-08:002011-11-21T20:38:18.836-08:00awesome write - love the rhythm and rhyme - defini...awesome write - love the rhythm and rhyme - definitely reads like a performance piece.Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-74050668670864408252011-11-20T07:53:34.068-08:002011-11-20T07:53:34.068-08:00powerful imagery.
:)powerful imagery.<br />:)The Noiselessnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-90325843369825896722011-11-20T06:13:03.745-08:002011-11-20T06:13:03.745-08:00Great. Carried me along.Great. Carried me along.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-77356457432435868392011-11-19T16:16:32.806-08:002011-11-19T16:16:32.806-08:00Lots of emotion, vividness here...Lots of emotion, vividness here...Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-78966081556479675152011-11-19T15:57:17.374-08:002011-11-19T15:57:17.374-08:00Thought this fantastic! Fierce word weaving that r...Thought this fantastic! Fierce word weaving that reads great aloud. Like the hustle and flow of the word play as well...but you had me with the title.Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-76245763316908727152011-11-19T14:53:45.518-08:002011-11-19T14:53:45.518-08:00Wow! I can see I'm way out of my league in th...Wow! I can see I'm way out of my league in this community. But I'm having fun reading all of it's amazing contributors.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-34793912283113193122011-11-19T12:37:04.859-08:002011-11-19T12:37:04.859-08:00eventually she will
set them all free
and be
your ...eventually she will<br />set them all free<br />and be<br />your only heaven in hell.<br /><br /><br />that's powerfulAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-77908201671772907652011-11-19T12:34:21.806-08:002011-11-19T12:34:21.806-08:00goodness...this is so full of emotions...perfect t...goodness...this is so full of emotions...perfect title and you describe the hard place well..<br /><br />An exhausted soil<br />is your mind<br />while her marbled hurricane<br />is free as a monster<br /><br />shew...that says much...nice lines...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-60788958822661380022011-11-19T12:27:30.663-08:002011-11-19T12:27:30.663-08:00deep with heavy emotions..with the perfect title.....deep with heavy emotions..with the perfect title..there is a silence that screams loudless but still can be heard better than cannon ballsClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-75170167193146496262011-06-16T23:25:10.578-07:002011-06-16T23:25:10.578-07:00Wonderful work....compliments.
Greetings, JoopWonderful work....compliments.<br /><br />Greetings, JoopJoop Zandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03387926065809859035noreply@blogger.com