tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post5373077515374601870..comments2023-05-10T02:18:35.355-07:00Comments on Bruises of the soul...: He is My Sea...Desert Rosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-45739052105104473472010-10-21T21:59:29.548-07:002010-10-21T21:59:29.548-07:00the images you use are just insane!! this is unden...the images you use are just insane!! this is undeniably sexy, and i just marvel at the multiple worlds that are within your grasp as an artist. i certainly enjoyed that ride!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-77496069326952567652010-10-09T09:06:51.980-07:002010-10-09T09:06:51.980-07:00Oh my, you're writing always leaves me restles...Oh my, you're writing always leaves me restless. In the most beautiful of ways. Fab One Shot. Love and Light, SenderAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-13789828754431623482010-10-05T08:53:16.346-07:002010-10-05T08:53:16.346-07:00@adreamygal thank you so much darling, the sea is ...@adreamygal thank you so much darling, the sea is in me..flowing :)<br /><br />@dustus how warm it is to have you around always Adam..i really miss your comments when you don't come..cheers buddy :)<br /><br />@tofyta you know ya tofy..he is in my lines, their source..it is all for him, my inspiration..forever and more :)<br /><br />@guatami thank you :)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-24720943121932138582010-10-05T08:48:51.333-07:002010-10-05T08:48:51.333-07:00@phil ray this was so sweet of you phil! i am so h...@phil ray this was so sweet of you phil! i am so happy you enjoy my poetry..:)<br /><br />@Talon thank you darling, i look forward to your writings as much, lots of love and warm hugs to you :)<br /><br />@moondustwriter its my honor to have you on my blog moon, onestoppoetry is my home..:) thank you for letting me part of it.:)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-50563944514922445332010-10-05T08:33:07.179-07:002010-10-05T08:33:07.179-07:00I couldn't help but be tickled by many of your...I couldn't help but be tickled by many of your commentator's comments :D And yes I fully agree with them. Romantic, steamy, lyrical, cold showers...all of the above! Love the title. The sea is very much like love...all encompassing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-91489420024646438512010-10-05T07:09:33.723-07:002010-10-05T07:09:33.723-07:00@Anonymous thank you for the warmth :)
@Mansoor Z...@Anonymous thank you for the warmth :)<br /><br />@Mansoor Zia yeah, you got that one right mansoor..:)<br /><br />@brianmiller1 thank you Brian..:)<br /><br />@signed...bkm hahaa well,that is a call for more intimacy then ha..:))Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-23178918005870407802010-10-05T07:06:03.417-07:002010-10-05T07:06:03.417-07:00@tuberider thank you so much, really humbled :)
@...@tuberider thank you so much, really humbled :)<br /><br />@timoteo ahahaa you certainly drew a big smile on my face Tim, cold showers on wednesdays ha ;) love having you always dear..:)<br /><br />@refuge insomniac Dear David, thank you for such sweet lines!<br /><br />@Sir thomas you are most welcomed Sir..;)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-33421320188287227222010-10-01T07:30:18.555-07:002010-10-01T07:30:18.555-07:00Its interesting to see that I read two of the vers...Its interesting to see that I read two of the verses about Sea and I love sea... the power and the metaphysical energy there is tremendous.. in fact all water bodies are great source of energy... OK now let me get back to your verse which I liked a lot... Your words "i heard myself thinking...<br />Wearing all my hesitation,...pouring my thoughts on the floor" made me feel the hsitation you were having...<br />"Do you really love me?" and then "he took me on his trip" took me to the vivid imagery that you were protraying.. I liked the soft seduction, the fall down and then the awakening.. Very interesting...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya <br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-74994647580961892912010-09-30T14:54:09.296-07:002010-09-30T14:54:09.296-07:00Whooohoo, I agree, this should not be read alone m...Whooohoo, I agree, this should not be read alone my friend!! Awesome!!Amandahttp://buttercup600.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-59438668404822726822010-09-30T00:42:45.362-07:002010-09-30T00:42:45.362-07:00Desert Rose:
Well I do believe, your email box mu...Desert Rose:<br /><br />Well I do believe, your email box must be filled and your home phone is ringing off the hook, all from male suitors and admirers, who adore you and want to marry you. You have it going on dear one, If I was a male I would ask to marry you too, <br /><br />I think I need to borrow a page form your book now and then and share with my partner to add some more sugar, spice, and fire.<br /><br />Lovely epic of sensual erotic love.<br /><br />Cheers,<br />Joannyjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-44213068991257717502010-09-29T17:21:23.037-07:002010-09-29T17:21:23.037-07:00oh my god!!! this is great!!
):)(:(oh my god!!! this is great!!<br />):)(:(alexhttp://r3m3mb3rm3-al3x.bogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-64498503884514040602010-09-29T15:46:47.347-07:002010-09-29T15:46:47.347-07:00The sea always withdraws. Until it fulfills its d...The sea always withdraws. Until it fulfills its destiny to return.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-90668084202002083232010-09-29T14:54:17.258-07:002010-09-29T14:54:17.258-07:00From ripples to waves, your writing is commanding....From ripples to waves, your writing is commanding. And, judging by the other comments, highly interactive! Great job!Belindahttp://thehalfwaypoint.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-86096660312570276822010-09-29T11:28:25.604-07:002010-09-29T11:28:25.604-07:00ur like an expert in romantic lyrical poetry, Rose...ur like an expert in romantic lyrical poetry, Rose :D lovely one shot! :)<br /><br /><a href="http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/09/28/the-crown/" rel="nofollow">My One Shot!</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-47469001290090836792010-09-29T10:44:51.938-07:002010-09-29T10:44:51.938-07:00Intensely sensual, your poem a sinuous ride curlin...Intensely sensual, your poem a sinuous ride curling like a wave crashing like the sea. Interesting style. I enjoyed it. Thanks, Gay @beachannyBeachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-69394472451186121312010-09-29T10:27:20.704-07:002010-09-29T10:27:20.704-07:00this for sure makes one wish to be flooded...this for sure makes one wish to be flooded...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-89542796507201110642010-09-29T10:22:23.480-07:002010-09-29T10:22:23.480-07:00Wow Queen you paint a very beautiful and enchantin...Wow Queen you paint a very beautiful and enchanting sea, and yes what a lover i truly enjoyed it babe all the lines got me so magical... hugs tight back xoxoWild Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05260455210731142858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-53939271714034140592010-09-29T10:02:05.766-07:002010-09-29T10:02:05.766-07:00Very romantic!
One line really stood out to me:
&...Very romantic!<br /><br />One line really stood out to me:<br />"Wearing all my hesitation"<br /><br />Nice One Shot, Desert Rose!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-70065828391747343112010-09-29T08:14:06.227-07:002010-09-29T08:14:06.227-07:00Wow. Look at all these guys panting after reading...Wow. Look at all these guys panting after reading these words. You've put me in a watery mood myself.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-50093071450476365162010-09-29T08:01:36.703-07:002010-09-29T08:01:36.703-07:00So steamy!
the middles makes itSo steamy!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/09/middle-makes-it.html" rel="nofollow">the middles makes it</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-11801275641914794182010-09-29T04:23:12.463-07:002010-09-29T04:23:12.463-07:00WoW bebo .. awesome poam O_O so lovely i can feel ...WoW bebo .. awesome poam O_O so lovely i can feel shahrukh between ur words ..(the sea took off his black glasses<br />and his black shirt<br />dangerously climbing all my thirst<br />he sat down and looked at me) u r Stunning & very Talented.. always ur poems take me to another world with my lovely king ... love u sweetheart..<br /><br />--<br />tofytaTofytahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03616537895575986777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-24111451858293108212010-09-29T04:13:33.867-07:002010-09-29T04:13:33.867-07:00Steamy waves linger in the wake of your poetic spl...Steamy waves linger in the wake of your poetic splash. A, you write like no other. Combination of feeling and imagery through a unique poetic voice. One Shot cheers!dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-77883165031350254932010-09-29T00:22:52.261-07:002010-09-29T00:22:52.261-07:00" my luxurious fantasy
getting ready to meet ..." my luxurious fantasy<br />getting ready to meet Him,<br />The Sea, storming his dimples at the waving crowd. "<br />I bow my head before your talent ...and before your sweet poetry..<br /><br />L1Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-1172485346175011972010-09-29T00:09:29.300-07:002010-09-29T00:09:29.300-07:00This was one of the best poem I have read so far ....This was one of the best poem I have read so far . The words have wonderfully been woven , carefully crafted from drops of sea ..Really really wonderful one ! Loved it :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3916229700701849828.post-48421767716971163942010-09-28T22:05:29.915-07:002010-09-28T22:05:29.915-07:00That sea had so many parallels with a lover hmmm
...That sea had so many parallels with a lover hmmm<br /><br />Timoteo just need to jump in the cold surf.<br /><br /><br />Another enjoyable piece dear Rose<br /><br />Thanks from sharing with One Shot<br /><br />blushing Moonmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.com