Just do your thing
don't regret a thing
lets plant our tree
with your seeds and my rain
share the pain
just as warm
beat that storm
vent
don't repent
I hear your anger
as i bent
to kiss two tears
hiding in a laughter
we may not write our fate
but we do carve our destiny
They say "Great ones walk alone"
happiness comes as a wicked loan
still you can make it
then bend it and break it
Illusions of ecstasy
Out of the nowhere
you make it to this everywhere
step up into your impossible
be that extremely unforgettable
Rise,
in the madness of the crowd
fantasize,
Dance your silence out loud
These Lullabies
Of your awakened night
Laugh your heart out
Love is what you are about
Even the moon knows
For whom the stars pose
Their every single light
Serenades of Rhapsody
Scrap some smiles along
Listen to your own song
spread your wings and fly
when the tide is high
You are the reason and the why
as hard as the Rock
still as gentle, as a butterfly
savagely moistened,
yet tenderly dry
Sailing in your now
Hailing your own Tao
Enchanted mystery
You who nobody really knows
You who is all but what he shows
You who is darkened in his glows
You who makes it to my everything
just when you simply do your thing
Being what my life is all about
Rain and thunder
Fire and whisper
Flood in my Nile
Like an answered prayer
You, Come to my temple
Blooming my harvest around your Euphoric Monsoon.
57 comments:
oh beautiful.. 'happiness comes as a wicked loan' ...so good, and 'spread your wings and fly' ...I fly reading your poetry...
As Usual BeroO ur Poems TAKING ME
To another world full of love and dreams .. I do not even feel anything around me,Your words always used to captivate me .. Love u sis & Keep it up darling :)
Tofyta
Whoa! This POEM is a euphoric monsoon. You get better and better, Rose. I won't pick apart individual lines, though many jumped out at me. I'll just say, I love this!
Oh, and I love your profile words on your sidebar. I wish everyone felt that way.
oh Abeer,
you, my fave
When a poem goes beyond beauty and perfection I really find it hard to say anything.
may tis be enough for you to understand how much I love everything you write more and more...
:)
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You always pick the best pictures! Love it sweetie... love it. ♥
Love the flow of this one....like a song...this is beautiful Rose!
smiles. lovely journey in understanding this man who is your everything...quite the character...
wow so powerful Abeer...fell in lvoe with every word. its just flows amazingly. proud to read you girl...keep floating ...
"still as gentle, as a butterfly
savagely moistened,
yet tenderly dry"
Way to contrast savagery with a butterfly. Makes me think of the different sides to individuals. Many emotions are expressed through your flow. Much about human personality also between the lines. I like what Louise said. Many of your lines do seem to take flight :)
So loving and sensual. Beautiful encouraging thoughts. Hope he's listening.
you KNOW how much i love this piece, dear lady! every word every nuance every particle - beautiful!!! great words!
Why you've written a song. I just almost heard the melody in the background and I surely heard your voice singing. Well done, and thank you. Gay @beachanny
"happiness comes as a wicked loan" - that made me really stop and think and it does sometimes feel like that...like it's something we have to pay for.
As always, Desert Rose, your poetry takes me on a lovely journey.
Sensually bold and beautifully told, love has no rules, it is filled with contradictions as your eloquent poem points out - swing of emotions intense pleasure - intense pain, why do we crave it so much? It is hard to say - and here your words flow from a woman's heart and soul capturing our inner most thoughts penned on ageless paper.
warm hugs,
joanny
Great hdonistic light fancy feel. Rhythm and rhyme in it's most glorious form...your work is truly stunning
as always i am engrossed by your verse...although i did stay a while at the opening image..but heck who wouldnt it...wonderful words...Dustus, talon,fireblossom..all their comments ring true..great share...pete
Sexy, beautiful!
ahh - beautiful.. i love the two tears
hiding in a laughter...says so much - and i love the pic you chose
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Musical, this one, and quick-paced. Built around sensual imagery and beckonings, with a surge of emotion solidly expressed. Good flow, lowly words.
Many images here that work to good purpose in forming this poem.
Enjoyed!
Lady Nyo
Whoa the sexual metaphors, the intense use of nature, the deep feelings of passion brought me to a massive arrousal of mind & body. Even the visual of the picture set the mood as something to be desired. I applaud on your growth. Your subtle use of rhyming was poignant & fitting. Thank you for sharing with me.
Politestranger
when you write, people stop breathing until you have completed your work and then....
*gasp*
extremely beautiful...
Oh what beautiful love...can hear it being put to music, lovely.
The flow of your words is like quick silver, such beauty. The beat is as strong as the heart of a lover, the words are exquisite.
The Lonely Recluse.
LOTS going on here. So many images, so many messages. Here's my entry for this week: http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/01/12/poetry-me/
You've expressed a world of love, many beautiful lines, and all the feelings. A veritable eight course repast, well worth revisiting.
An extremely beautiful poem full of passion and thrill. Enjoyed it very much. :)
Wow! So glad I stumbled in here and got to read this :)
Salivated on this line:
"Dance your silence out loud"
Lovely.
I found it impossible to read this without becoming lost in its rhythm. I didn't want to get out of it either...great piece and lovely imagery.
it is a lovely shout out.
Thanks for sharing..
I agree with those who mentioned a song in their comments. This is lyrical, and needs a melody to carry it.
What a sensual and tender poem
"You who nobody really knows
You who is all but what he shows
You who is darkened in his glows
You who makes it to my everything
just when you simply do your thing"
Simply lovely.
Thanks Abeer for share your beautiful poems, and your kind words.
Being oneself is the best one can do.. really!
"we may not write our fate
but we do carve our destiny" -- these lines were like crazy good!!
Gosh.. I so so liked the tone of this poem... stern, sensuous, practical, caring, all at the same time!
Awesome!
"we may not write our fate
but we do carve our destiny"
Much wisdom in these words...this poem has great rhythm, flow, and depth. A stellar write...thank you for sharing.
I enjoyed it so much.. thanks for sharing this one...
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illusions of ecstasy out of nowhere...
lovely.. here's mine for this thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/
Wow! Serious expression here. Loved the last lie "Blooming my heart..."
Happy Rally
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Can't tell which part i liked most...all is breathtaking..loved it.
hailing your own Tao....that is wonderful way to go through life....blessings ..live each day filled with as much happiness as possible...bkm
Erotic, natural theme(s) coupled with beguiling word choices = exemplary seduction poem.
Great on 2nd read too :)
very nice! I enjoyed your lyrical masterpiece! awesome :)
Thank you!
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"happiness comes as a wicked loan"
love the line..
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"Dance your silence out loud"
how absolutly amazing that line was for me...your peotry is so full of emotions
"Dance your silence out loud" Just beautifuly expressed....waw....i keep reading it and waw....
"Happiness comes as a wicked loan" is an experience in itself. Your work is richly evocative and a delicious dessert a harshly adventurous day.
i absolutely loved this one...so many great lines and imagery...please write more :-)
very nice post..
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"Out of the nowhere
you make it to this everywhere
step up into your impossible
be that extremely unforgettable"
I love these lines! So inspiring! Would you mind if I read this poem to my yoga class?
Great imagery and play with words.
Great lines!!!
I had to come back & read this again. It's even more beautiful the second time around.
"lets plant our tree
with your seeds and my rain"
amazing...
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