Running
over the years
such a long road
heart is a heavy load
flashing memories
leading your fears
heartbeats racing
what are we facing?
shattered mind
eyes on rewind
boarding on your trip
holding on the time
in a tight grip
of hope
all loved ones are around
silence has a crashing sound
sleepless nights
victorious fights
your red eyes speak
your heart out..
screaming your locked up tears
in a ragging shoot out
but nothing comes out
another blankness
strength of weakness
you are about
in times of hardship
we shall be near
see,we are always here
little prayers
are sent your way
little prayers
would lead the way
to the roaming angels
flying around
carrying the blessings
from the Soulful bound
holding you tight
spreading their light
for not for a second
you are alone
you have us all
wrapped in a wave
of love for you
as you are simply
all we have.
47 comments:
well said - we are never alone...angels are all around us...as you state...we do all need angels...blessings...bkm
very good poem.
Amazing, thank you.
Be happy
I liked the staccato play of this poem. A very fun read for such a serious subject.
Beautiful sentiment, lines, and care in your poem, Abeer. Great choice of pictures for it as well—makes the love of friendship seem both human and timeless.
this reads almost like a hip-hop style - only w/o the profanity. :)
love this.
very good poem.Amazing bebo .. thnx for it bby :))
Great choice of pictures and Machiel is awesome ;)
ah, wonderful..why is it we feel so alone at times...thinking we are the only ones going through something...when so many share our pain and do the same...and angels watch to comfort us...when we are ready. nice one shot!
This almost reads like stream of consciousness but it is to well crafted to be spontaneous. Nice work!
I have read this one several times now, and each time I think I'm getting closer to what it's about...it does what captivating poetry does--and that's to make me keep thinking about it...
I believe in angels indeed. And this evokes them nicely.
I love the way this flows. My fav is, "Roaming angels flying around". Beautiful.
A cry in the night with the comfort that somewhere we may be heard. Thanks for dropping by. Mine is called I’m the beast that you fear, in the shadows of night
i have to agree with dustus about the image, it was a wonderful picture that so enhanced the beauty of your words..are we ever alone..only if we chose to be.without the means to communicate mankind could not survive..thanks for sharing Pete
it's so good we are not alone - running all those years through life...you captured it so nicely with your lines and underline it so beautiful with the pictures - i could go and embrace the two cuties...
it's true, you know. we never are truly alone...
even if we feel as if we are...
Beautiful, nice reminder that we are never alone. Love that precious picture as well.
The parent's song and plea "let that have angels" to protect them on the way. Good poem. Thanks for posting. Gay
Nicely done. True that we should never feel alone.
There's many levels to this piece. And it's a beautiful thought that no matter our choices, no matter our paths on the journey of life, we are not alone.
Such a comforting piece. I was captivated by the phrase "eyes on rewind." In times of strife, it's so easy to lose sight of all the love and support that surrounds one.
so beautifully thought and said, desert rose! and it is true, isn't it, here in blogland - among all our caring friends we've never met but have come to know and care about - and be there for -
I loved the staccato beat to this poem ,fast paced, and a very lovely poem. But then again I am never disappointed when I come to read your poems, always beautiful and well written. A sheer joy.
Joanny
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/
I had to read this today....it spoke to me personally and for that I thank you!! Wonderful poem my friend xxxx
Desert Rose
I think that we are just incurable romantic type personality's that loves, beauty, romance, fantasy, and peace and joy for all of mankind.
At least that is what I see in your passionate poetry about life and love.
As always, love to stop by and soak up the beauty of the written word it is so powerful.
Cheers,
Joanny
@Joanny couldn't agree more dear Joanny,i feel you right ,this heart of yours beat in tune with mine..i enjoy having you around darling..cheers to love always..:))
@Signed...bkm i believe in that,we are never alone,always surrounded with angels,who some we see that are called friends and family,others we don't see that are messengers of God to bring us comfort and peace..:)
@Monkey man thank you for your comment,it is a special poem for me..:)
@Dustus when i read you here,i feel much blessings Adam,you are such an amazing poet,means a lot my friend..thank you..:)
@Kim williams thank you Kim..:)
@Tofytaa you are such a sweetheart tofy..thank you darling for your lovely words..:)
@Brian miller we are never alone Brian..and saying it even feels so much better..:)
@Steven thank you steven! i am this kinda spontaneous in general,don't know what the rules are,even if i ever did..i don't think i ll follow them anyway..:)
so nice of you to stop by..:)
@Kim williams thank you Kim..:)
@Tofytaa you are such a sweetheart tofy..thank you darling for your lovely words..:)
@Brian miller we are never alone Brian..and saying it even feels so much better..:)
@Steven thank you steven! i am this kinda spontaneous in general,don't know what the rules are,even if i ever did..i don't think i ll follow them anyway..:)
so nice of you to stop by..:)
@Kim williams thank you Kim..:)
@Tofytaa you are such a sweetheart tofy..thank you darling for your lovely words..:)
@Brian miller we are never alone Brian..and saying it even feels so much better..:)
@Steven thank you steven! i am this kinda spontaneous in general,don't know what the rules are,even if i ever did..i don't think i ll follow them anyway..:)
so nice of you to stop by..:)
@Timoteo i think it is what poetry is suppose to achieve Tim,every one gets it the way he felt it,so glad you got there..:)
@Fierblossom Me too..thank you,they are around..:)
@CM i feel they know us,help us when in need and they carry for us messages of love..:) thank you for your sweet words..:)
@John's comments yeah it is..and i read your piece,i agree it was chilling indeed!..thank you for coming by..:)
@Pete Marshell lovely words Pete,but sometimes even if we chose to be alone,some angels won't let us..they are close,ready to lift us up and tear down the walls in a minute..they are love..:)
@Claudia aww thank you darling,i know i love these two cuties,looked like little angels to me..:)
@Kay exactly Kay,and here we are all around for each other,i don't believe we can ever feel alone..even if we truly are...:)
@Suzi cafe thank you Suzi..lovely to have you around..:)
This was so soulful, and compassionate...
I could sense the care and feeling in the words...
Yes, none of us is alone... and this is one thing we shouldn't forget!
A beautifully written poem...
@Talon i am so happy you got this one well Talon,your poem is a magnificent masterpiece that i can't get enough of reading..love having you in my sanctuary..:)thank you!
@Pattiken yeah,patti i believe when we are in times of crisis or problems we always put our memories tape on and eyes rewind to see the whole filmstrip in seconds..thank you dear for coming around..:)
@Gypsywoman we are always around each other Gypsy,it makes us feel stronger and here all the love we share is completely unconditional which makes it everlasting..:)
thank you darling for your warm comment..hugs tight..:)
@Buttercup so glad it made you feel comfortable and happy buttercup,now you made my day as well..:)
@Kavita thank you so much Kavita,it means so much to me..:)
In that riot of noise and upset and tumult comes the calm of love and loved ones and friends. Nice one.
"silence has a crashing sound"
that was so cool
@Glynn thank you for your kind visit Glynn,glad you enjoyed my poem..:)
@L.L.Barkat i always believe silence is much louder then we think..:)
sometimes i think we r alone even with us, sometimes i think we never can be alone...
life..
all the best dear
This first made me think about my son and ALL the love he gets from so many people... it'as impossible for him to feel lonely... But as all of us, he'll probably feel so someday, despite all those wings around him...
I also have all that , and being aware of it gives me so much peace!
Lovely poem DR... as always!
:)
A comforting thought.
Hey, nice site you've got here. Amazing poem, as well, possessed of some rather beautiful sentiments. It's got style, to be sure, and flow.
Thank goodness we are not alone...
a very comforting poem:)
From the beginning I was drawn into this roller coaster ride of emotion that finally washed ashore and left we wanting more, but knowing I was loved…
@Dulce your words touched me,as always sweety..and yeah,we are never alone eventho sometimes it looks as if we are..:)
@jason evans thank you..:)
@Chris G thank you for stopping by,glad you enjoyed it..:)
@hoiden i am so happy it made you feel that way..:)
@Sit thomas you draw marvelous paintings with your lines yourself,,:)loved we all are..:)
Beero!
You surprise me every time, with your choice of words, often subtle, often shouting from far yet near.
Sheer Awesomeness!
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