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Tuesday, September 14, 2010

Girly stuff...



Curling in bed
in cute puppets nity
exquisite insanity
hiding in my streams
uncensored dreams
you and me in steams
drying off my nail polish
flying away in mermaid fantasy
building images in my head
lines of you roll on this bed
dancing shades on your face
bring you close to my embrace
your steps at my door
scented breeze enchanting the floor
gentle knocks
arranging some books
pretending i haven't heard
knowing my racing heartbeats
you definitely heard
preparing my soul
to answer your call
I felt your breath
resting on my nape
like a falling grape
in your mouth,
i fell
in your arms
the warmth, flavored me
sweetening ecstasy
waves of bliss
erupted as we kiss
lips in celebration
souls in reincarnation
your fingers painting
yearning lines on my skin
colors enchanting
our midnight spin
wicked smiles
eyes wide shut
time flies
like a professional stunt
you lead your way
on to my hills
tenderly brushing
the exotic thrills
rising in my valleys of danger



wearing your breath
as my new cherry lipstick
blended with my 5th avenue drops
the world stops
at your arrival
put on your shivering pulse
a round of pearls around my neck
addressing your lips
my fashionable bliss
drowning in feverish blush
enjoying every single touch
picking of your eyes
my favorite look
reading in your mind
my lifetime book
making for your doll a home
in your arms
treats of you,
never enough
let me be
the woman in you
share with me
some more of you
you reign my mind
enjoying our intimate games
classified, Girly stuff.



43 comments:

abcpatty said...

From a Girly girl,
I simply love girly stuff. Love the quick flow and short sentences. Great OneShot

looking forward to more or your work

Refuge Insomniac said...

I really enjoyed this poem, and the visuals were beautiful. Thank you for sharing!

Collective Epiphanies said...

Love your imagery; fluid and sensual. There are many exquisite layers, painted with feminine ardor.

Thanks for stopping by and joining my blog.

Desert Rose said...

@abcpatty thank you girl ;) girly stuff are too special..intimate and evolving..love having you around always..:)

@refuge insomniac what a lovely surprise to see you David! thank you for your sweet comment..:)

@collective Epiphanies i Enjoy your blog very much! thank you for your kind words..:)

Brian Miller said...

dang when i think you can not get more sensual you come up with new ways...wearing your breath as lipstick...i strive to be as fluid...tight one shot!

Timoteo said...

Exotic...erotic...I'm going psychotic!

Wild Rose said...

Queen ...haha...you know where my mind went with this so i'll conclude with mine love the sensuality in it..this is my kind of girly stuff darling. Now off to play with him.. xoxo

dustus said...

Thanks for sharing part of the classified info. lol Seriously though, your control of language is apparent in the way you can alter the rhyme of the lines and change cadence to fit the meanings of the words you use and reveal so much. my buddy rocks :)

L.L. Barkat said...

I liked the nail polish drying. Cool image :)

SuziCate said...

Love the play on words in this, beautiful.

RiikaInfinityy said...

Lovely and beautifully written! Love the girly stuffs over here :P

G-Man said...

I just got in touch with my feminine side....WOW!!!

Glynn said...

Sensual, building with a kind of ferocious tension and energy -- this isreally something. Whew. Good one.

signed...bkm said...

that sounds like someone enjoyed all that Girly Stuff...bkm

TALON said...

Classified, Girly stuff, but so beautifully expressed and shared. The words just tumble down the page in a beautiful pace that matches the subject matter perfectly!

Ian said...

nice

jason evans said...

The words themselves are delicately perfumed. The depths of femininity too enticing not to become immersed.

betweenhearts75 said...

Wow, I especially love the lines "Your fingers painted, yearning lines along my skin" ~ Wonderful writing, much enjoyed! :) ~April

senderupwords said...

I am not a big girly girl guy... but this has a wonderful romanticism to it. Love and Light, Sender

gautami tripathy said...

Sensuously beautiful!

nowhere island

Shashi said...

Souls in reincarnation... grapes in mouth.. what a lovely feeling that you vividly portray...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya

Eric Alder said...

Slowly stirring and sexy... nice work!

Chris G. said...

Wonderful poem. A sensual delight, coursing with lovely imagery--erotic in its beauty. Great work!

Leo said...

passionate and pacy :) enjoyed the read Desert Rose..!

My 1 Shot

Monkey Man said...

Very sensual piece.

John's comments said...

Sensuous and a cursorily private window. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. Hope your week goes well.

Belinda said...

Beautiful! Fluid, graceful, wonderful expression.

Jingle said...

cute and hot at the same time.
superb write.

william said...

sounds like paradise, excellent poem :)

Sir Thomas said...

simple and leaves me longing for you

Dulce said...

WOW Rose!
What a master piece of love and sensuality and those pics supporting such scenario.... just great. One of your bests!
;)

JH said...

uncertain sweet bliss... you toy but desire.. girly indeed

joanny said...

girly stuff----

Beneath the makeup and behind the smile very definitely a woman and enjoying it. Beautiful sensual artistic expression in your words.

Cheers,
Joanny
and too think I changed my photos for one shot to be less then more. a lesson learned, be true be daring..

Maureen said...

I like your mix of the unusual ("cute puppets nity") and the arresting ("exotic thrills/ rising in my valleys of danger") and that great end line, "classified, Girly stuff".

joanny said...

Desert Rose

What I was referring too,when I did my post, I changed my photo three times, instead of being true to my instincts the first time. when I read your beautiful poem about love and life and the compelling force to connect, you were true to yourself and went with your natural instincts and wrote a delicious ecstatic poem for the senses.

Joanny

हेमंत कुमार ♠ Hemant Kumar said...

Very nice,emotional and atractive potry...

Pete Marshall said...

hot, hot hot...kinda wonder if you should put an over 18 acceptance on your site...you are getting so damned hot....loved it..cheers pete

Claudia said...

that speaks to all senses - love how you bring the smell and taste sense in...
..as my new cherry lipstick
blended with my 5th avenue drops..what a flavor!

ladynimue said...

you had me lost again in your words .. Loved it !!

kavisionz said...

Very reflective! Excellent wordplay, as usual!!
I was so carried away by your imagery that I think I could even smell the perfume.. phheew!

Very beautifully written indeed!!

ladynimue said...

Here's a small token of love for you : http://ladynimue.wordpress.com/2010/09/20/bliss/

Cor said...

Wow, a sensual but very tasteful poem. You are a master of words. I love your poems every week, and you just never cease to amaze. Great work again.

iris orpi said...

womanly, and absolutely divine! you have the license to be poetic about feminine wiles, and boy, do you use it! bravo!

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