Curling in bed
in cute puppets nity
exquisite insanity
hiding in my streams
uncensored dreams
you and me in steams
drying off my nail polish
flying away in mermaid fantasy
building images in my head
lines of you roll on this bed
dancing shades on your face
bring you close to my embrace
your steps at my door
scented breeze enchanting the floor
gentle knocks
arranging some books
pretending i haven't heard
knowing my racing heartbeats
you definitely heard
preparing my soul
to answer your call
I felt your breath
resting on my nape
like a falling grape
in your mouth,
i fell
in your arms
the warmth, flavored me
sweetening ecstasy
waves of bliss
erupted as we kiss
lips in celebration
souls in reincarnation
your fingers painting
yearning lines on my skin
colors enchanting
our midnight spin
wicked smiles
eyes wide shut
time flies
like a professional stunt
you lead your way
on to my hills
tenderly brushing
the exotic thrills
rising in my valleys of danger
wearing your breath
as my new cherry lipstick
blended with my 5th avenue drops
the world stops
at your arrival
put on your shivering pulse
a round of pearls around my neck
addressing your lips
my fashionable bliss
drowning in feverish blush
enjoying every single touch
picking of your eyes
my favorite look
reading in your mind
my lifetime book
making for your doll a home
in your arms
treats of you,
never enough
let me be
the woman in you
share with me
some more of you
you reign my mind
enjoying our intimate games
classified, Girly stuff.
42 comments:
From a Girly girl,
I simply love girly stuff. Love the quick flow and short sentences. Great OneShot
looking forward to more or your work
I really enjoyed this poem, and the visuals were beautiful. Thank you for sharing!
Love your imagery; fluid and sensual. There are many exquisite layers, painted with feminine ardor.
Thanks for stopping by and joining my blog.
@abcpatty thank you girl ;) girly stuff are too special..intimate and evolving..love having you around always..:)
@refuge insomniac what a lovely surprise to see you David! thank you for your sweet comment..:)
@collective Epiphanies i Enjoy your blog very much! thank you for your kind words..:)
dang when i think you can not get more sensual you come up with new ways...wearing your breath as lipstick...i strive to be as fluid...tight one shot!
Exotic...erotic...I'm going psychotic!
Queen ...haha...you know where my mind went with this so i'll conclude with mine love the sensuality in it..this is my kind of girly stuff darling. Now off to play with him.. xoxo
Thanks for sharing part of the classified info. lol Seriously though, your control of language is apparent in the way you can alter the rhyme of the lines and change cadence to fit the meanings of the words you use and reveal so much. my buddy rocks :)
I liked the nail polish drying. Cool image :)
Love the play on words in this, beautiful.
Lovely and beautifully written! Love the girly stuffs over here :P
I just got in touch with my feminine side....WOW!!!
Sensual, building with a kind of ferocious tension and energy -- this isreally something. Whew. Good one.
that sounds like someone enjoyed all that Girly Stuff...bkm
Classified, Girly stuff, but so beautifully expressed and shared. The words just tumble down the page in a beautiful pace that matches the subject matter perfectly!
The words themselves are delicately perfumed. The depths of femininity too enticing not to become immersed.
Wow, I especially love the lines "Your fingers painted, yearning lines along my skin" ~ Wonderful writing, much enjoyed! :) ~April
I am not a big girly girl guy... but this has a wonderful romanticism to it. Love and Light, Sender
Sensuously beautiful!
nowhere island
Souls in reincarnation... grapes in mouth.. what a lovely feeling that you vividly portray...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Slowly stirring and sexy... nice work!
Wonderful poem. A sensual delight, coursing with lovely imagery--erotic in its beauty. Great work!
passionate and pacy :) enjoyed the read Desert Rose..!
My 1 Shot
Very sensual piece.
Sensuous and a cursorily private window. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. Hope your week goes well.
Beautiful! Fluid, graceful, wonderful expression.
cute and hot at the same time.
superb write.
sounds like paradise, excellent poem :)
simple and leaves me longing for you
WOW Rose!
What a master piece of love and sensuality and those pics supporting such scenario.... just great. One of your bests!
;)
uncertain sweet bliss... you toy but desire.. girly indeed
girly stuff----
Beneath the makeup and behind the smile very definitely a woman and enjoying it. Beautiful sensual artistic expression in your words.
Cheers,
Joanny
and too think I changed my photos for one shot to be less then more. a lesson learned, be true be daring..
I like your mix of the unusual ("cute puppets nity") and the arresting ("exotic thrills/ rising in my valleys of danger") and that great end line, "classified, Girly stuff".
Desert Rose
What I was referring too,when I did my post, I changed my photo three times, instead of being true to my instincts the first time. when I read your beautiful poem about love and life and the compelling force to connect, you were true to yourself and went with your natural instincts and wrote a delicious ecstatic poem for the senses.
Joanny
Very nice,emotional and atractive potry...
hot, hot hot...kinda wonder if you should put an over 18 acceptance on your site...you are getting so damned hot....loved it..cheers pete
that speaks to all senses - love how you bring the smell and taste sense in...
..as my new cherry lipstick
blended with my 5th avenue drops..what a flavor!
you had me lost again in your words .. Loved it !!
Very reflective! Excellent wordplay, as usual!!
I was so carried away by your imagery that I think I could even smell the perfume.. phheew!
Very beautifully written indeed!!
Here's a small token of love for you : http://ladynimue.wordpress.com/2010/09/20/bliss/
Wow, a sensual but very tasteful poem. You are a master of words. I love your poems every week, and you just never cease to amaze. Great work again.
womanly, and absolutely divine! you have the license to be poetic about feminine wiles, and boy, do you use it! bravo!
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