within the pain,rises the madness of reason and the sanity of the illusion..:)
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Tuesday, October 5, 2010
Curves...
I know the lines
on your forehead when you frown
i see your pulsing nerves
in your neck
those ones i yearn to lick
when they bump
the lines of your lips when you pout
when i am what you don't talk about
your lips linger
to whisper
my name
burning my flame
with a devouring sigh
and an expert thumb
i know the lines of your nape
as it meets my lips in a soft angle
moisturizing mingle
they shiver
in acquainting trigger
the minute they press
your spine confess
my love
like a savage hallucinating drum
i come
closer to your shoulder blades
surfing on the lines of your back
vertical beggars
mystical dwellers
are my scented blows
as they embrace the wondering quivers
enchanted to my well trained fingers
painting my longing
reciting your belonging
to me
Feel me
signing in my presence
on your craving sheets
all over yours
hold me
as my lips would haunt your skin
spelling all my secrets of existence
to your dripping tongue
Our sweetness pours
shape my being on your chest
with drops of joy
would touch your hardness
to hear your moan under my softness
humid strikes
louder spikes
your silence,
i scream as my own
i just feel it when you moan
at my savage slides
tender collides
show ups and hides
you in me
eternal joy
perpetual bliss
what do the lines know
they are just ruling the show
resting on my curves
liberating all your nerves
melting our beings
into the One
let us erase the lines as we meet
let us erase the curves as we become Us.
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44 comments:
My dear friend you are definitely the poetess of LOVE (par excellence), the expert the ONE
Me encanta hummmm... oh so sensual and peaceful... love is worth experiencing- if only by reading YOU!
:)
Yowza! The poem practically exudes sparks from the screen. Hot!
Smokin!
you have no idea how my lips linger to whisper your name....
very nice
“My love, I have tried with all my being
to grasp a form comparable to thine own,
but nothing seems worthy;…” - Anthony Kolos -
What more can I say; I love your poems!
"like a savage hallucinating drum / I come" I am speechless and in need of a cold shower. lol Incredible
Wow!!! super hot - I love it!
:)
You are definitely the love lyricist! Excellent as always!
"Let us erase the curves, as we become US" < of course to me this line makes this a far more beautifully passionate, intoxicating poem. (love your writing anyway) Wonderful! :) ~April
nice. i like the erasing of the lines as two become one...sensual as always...great one shot!
There is a latin boiling in this One Shot.
Love romance, poetry nice work
romantic poetry is like drinking a fine wine, saved for a special occasion. and loved by all who get a taste of it's beauty
What Dulce said.....WOW!!!
Beautifully Erotic...Thank You.
Another sensual dessert . . .
Very sensual and sexy!
oh, what the heck, just for fun! ;)
Amazingly seductive and emotionally lustfull... I enjoyed the journey... you capture passion and the related activities very well..
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So passionate...nice write.
Cheers!
I like the idea of erasing the lines between the two. Who needs lines????
Great romance, great poetry - love
thanks for sharing with One Shot
Moon hugs
Oh, boy, this is a hot one! I feel a bit like a voyeur reading it. ;-)
words fall short to tell you how much i enjoy your words .. they are a treat in itself .. to all senses alike :)
Sultry and sexy words! Wow!
You DO have that 'way with words' which paint pictures--and OH! what pieces you paint, to be hung on the walls of the heart, the soul!
Thank you. My first visit here, I think?!
I'll be BACH!
"...surfing on the lines of your back
vertical beggars..." - you write of the human anatomy so perfectly! I always lose myself in your poetry in the softest, sweetest way. Gorgeous!
Such a beautiful exposition of love. Your blog is exquisite, as is your spirit.
oh wow - steamy as always - yet so tender - erasing the lines...nice!
Yeow, that is hot!
"my love
like a savage hallucinating drum
i come" -- I think my computer screen is melting right about now...
Love the heat, how you wield it, turn it up in this poem.
again i am taken...what a ride!!!..pete
umm, a lil steamy! Great detailing of love defined....
I have to say you truly are the queen of Romance...my my, every time you take my breath away...hot hot hot and awesome!!!! Great Oneshot!! Mwah xxx
Like a savage hallucinating drum/I come...
Remarkable lines...
I think a savage hallucinating drum would get a pounding headache after a while.
Totally Beautiful!Sensual,yet so tender!
Makes you long to be desired and loved!One of the beauty of being human!
"My lips would haunt your skin"..love that, feelings running all over the place!!
Wow! This is fabulous. And very steamy! I like it. :)
-C
It's beautifully sensual. Well done.
Consistently exceptional carnal-minded verse. Hot stuff. :)
wow that was great :)
Wow, what a sensual story of love. When two people know each other that well, it is bound to sizzle.
" as my lips would haunt your skin
spelling all my secrets of existence"
Oh God that"s one of the best poems for u Bebo .. i loved it alooooooot .. sure i can feel shahrukh everywhere & can feel ur real love for him .. thnx alot for that awesome one .. love u for ever my best sister. <3
Steamy!
ecstasies
My dear one;
Your poetry is exquisite, sensual luxury for ones heart, soul and mind. You give love and passion a whole new meaning, a free unfettered mind and soul.
Your words are even more visual and imaginative then the lovely images, you are hard to capture in one image.
Warmest hugs,
Joanny
love it so naughty hahaha love the feelings .....love u berooo
:)petals on skin. The beauty of blogging; there is so much beauty, in one petal in one poem.
in life if we see it.
Thanks for this and having visited my (other) blog. katrin
i can only sigh at the romance and intimacy captured here...
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