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Wednesday, December 15, 2010

Fluffy...



Holding my fluffy kitty
I sat by the memories fireplace
Listening to the old stories
Told by the granny
To the little kids
About that charming knight
Who made the princess fall
deep into his heavenly call
When he arrived once
In her insomniac night
giving her one more chance
to live

Like the moon
he was revealed
in the face of life,
as her protective shield
Her beauty was his bliss
his lips, melting in her kiss
That she disappeared
Ever since
that mischievous kiss

Riding his dreams
He took her there
In his everywhere
She used to cook for him
Her thoughts for dinner
Inhaling his glories
out of her life breath
Cleaning up his burdening worries
with a tender smile
the minute he comes home
to her arms
She polishes her lips
With his all night trips
Weaving from his absence
Her cold winter shawl of warmth
Recording his victories glows
upon her royal skin
The triumphant knight bows
Submitting to her within
He gently slips
All his tears
on her cheeks
Smashing her fears
She invites the stars
To their night parade
lean upon the moon
at his darkened shade
her whole being blossoms
at his arrival
pouring within her bosom
his longing arousal
he picks from her eyes
her all day stories
she fingertips of his humming cries
all his paralyzed answers
in their kingdom of dreams
they lived happily ever after

One enchanted laughter
sarcastically cynical
Slipped of my screaming silence
chills in my bones
dreams extended for loans
for now,it just seems to come back
as the oak branches crack
In the fireplace
I heard our favorite track
Playing in the background of my childish mind.



32 comments:

May kosba said...

Royal beauty is all I can say about this piece :)))
May

joanny said...

Desert Rose

This epic lovely poem, starts off slow and sweet, then picks up a little faster tempo, till the cadence swiftly quickens as well as our hearts, you take us along on another beautiful journey through your vision and words,

warm hugs,'
joanny

JH said...

detailed events of passion :)

Chris G. said...

Beautiful dreams, or memories, tempered by the sharp intrusion of reality. It begins in fantasy, beautiful and magical and uplifting, only for the ending stanza to snap us back. Great piece, very good sense of progression.

Sir Thomas said...

beautiful

makes me hold My new fluffy even closer and listen to your tale....

Helena Malheur said...

beautiful and enchanting until that last stanza -- it was a snap back to reality for sure... well done! enjoyed it. :)

Claudia said...

we should never stop telling the stories of knights and deep heartfelt love and dreams... lovely...

Timoteo said...

Favorite lines:

he picks from her eyes
her all day stories

I knew at the "happily ever after" fairy tale ending there had to be more...back to reality in that poignant way of yours...

Magical!

Gabriela Abalo said...

Beautiful - enchanting :)

another great poem

loveNlight
Gabi

SuziCate said...

"epic" as Joanny says is perfect in describing this tale of love. Really enjoyed. Beautiful

Kodjo Deynoo said...

A wave between dreams and reality, very nicely portrayed

Brian Miller said...

you capture my day dreams well...stories should be told again and again...they ignite the heart and mind...nice close too.

Asobime said...

A lovely and enchanting poem.

Fantasy weaved well with reality.

Lady Nyo

PattiKen said...

Ah , a fairy tale love story. Very passionate.

Lisa said...

I love it when someone tells me a story - and this is really sweet...love

"Like the moon
he was revealed
in the face of life,
as her protective shield"

Just one example :) Nice!

Kavita said...

Fantastic! Despite the sarcastic "return to reality" towards the end, this poem held a childish beauty and innocence to it...
Call me stupid, but I still believe in 'em fairy tales :) There's always time to grow up I suppose...

Sumit Sarkar said...

So romantic and beautiful..
:))

Anonymous said...

thank u..
no matter for whom u write..
u write amazing poems
i love ur words ..
btfl as always..
im in tears, as always ..
Be happy

Refuge Insomniac said...

You twirl me into your poems, like cotton candy on a stick - and it’s wonderful! Cheers, David

Rick said...

You were born with such an impressive talent!

Fireblossom said...

I am pressed for time (library comp), but i want to say, your writing and your blog delight me, too!

scentofmyheart said...

So sweet, and despite the hard slap to reality on the end, still magical!

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Anonymous said...

agree with scenofmyheart.
.... .
God bless U.

Dulce said...

As sweet as it gets...
Your wordsa are always shining in my mind as I rad them and a bit later on...
...lovely... and I so love fluffy cats!
Got me thre (lol)

Great work D Rose
Thank you!

Dulce

KB said...

Romantic and beautiful. Love the pic too.

GYPSYWOMAN said...

such an absolutely incredibly beautifully told story, dear lady! just brilliant - i could go on and on but it would only be duplicative of what has already been said of your magnificent words here! brava!!

M.L. Gallagher said...

No matter how many times I have loved and lost, I still believe in happily ever after.

And your poem is such a beautiful ride into the magic!

Love the pic and the kitty too!

Very lovely.

LouiseG

-- so nice to meet you here again and at my place too! Thanks.

Marlee-I Mystic said...

Great piece, very reflective internally.

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