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Tuesday, December 28, 2010

Grammar...



Dreams have another sound
that i know by heart
ticking to my soul
every night
rising to my fall
Holding on tight
As I call them,
Him.
The One and the All
He is.
The one who is nameless
Identified with my confusion
shapeless
like the touch of time
Endless
within me,
He is the Time .

He,
Is the one who is only few letters
of a love word
haphazardly visited with those,
"Don'ts"
shutting the doors of fantasies,
"Not's"
Opening the roads of ecstasies,
"whys"
Inviting the tears to roll
on lines of euphoric submission
and the "Hows"
that are Exotically unanswered
craving in His moaning silence

He is more then
a "No!", a "Never will be.",
A Happening He is in me
a "would it ever?" or a "when?"..
Then,
a stammer
between tears and laughter
He is not more then few numbers,
Those of the lottery ticket
I am playing with my fate.





28 comments:

Eric Alder said...

It's your game to play. Nice One Shot!

BVS said...

This one has to be read over and over and with every read meanings and feelings sink in. Amazing piece! Love it :-)

Claudia said...

..He is more then
a "No!", a "Never will be."..sounds like he definitely is...smiles

Diana Lee said...

"....Those of the lottery ticket
I am playing with my fate..." I know this journey well :-) A very nice one-shot.

Fireblossom said...

Thew whole thing spoke to me, but the last five lines are charged.

Brian Miller said...

play that ticket...and i hope its a winner for you...smiles. nice one shot!

dustus said...

Your poem is very interesting in terms of the conventions of English grammar——deep, inventive. Invokes sympathy for the speaker under the currents of pointed meanings. Starts with an amazing first line too. Unfortunately, odds of winning the lottery are obviously not good, though that doesn't stop most players from dreaming their prosperous dreams. Can definitely, sadly, relate to that in my own way. Cheers, Abeer.

hedgewitch said...

Read this twice--full of nuance and very sensual. Playing the game of love, and everyone's a gambler in that one. Nice write.

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Teresa said...

Mesmerizing poem. I love all the deeper meanings.

joanny said...

There are so many ways -- big and small - to express ones love for another - here words of love are beautifully written through the heart and soul of a poet-

Sweetly expressed in your own lovely style.

cheers,
joanny

Asobime said...

This is a lovely, lovely poem, Rose.

It has a simple resonance which is very deep.

Beautiful. And hopeful.

Lady Nyo

Refuge Insomniac said...

I love dreams, as they stir up emotions, which often remind us to apply some much-needed conscious attention to some areas of our life. Without dreams, nothing is possible; without dreams, there is no future. Dreams are the power, which drives invention, which drives our imagination and more importantly our love. Without a ticket, no dream of winning is possible. Like your poem, dreams give us hope!

LauraX said...

beautiful!

Thoughts Not Lost said...

This has many layers to it. I think I could read this many times and get a new meaning with each read. Great work!

Carrie Burtt said...

Life is full of beautiful risks...this is captivating Rose! :-)

PattiKen said...

There is something both spiritual and romantic in this. I love that you leave the interpretation to the reader.

Aquarius63 said...

Beautiful poem as always.

Anita.

Dulce said...

Oh My dear Abeer,
You leave me in awe with that way of yours with words, love whys and nos and don't ... but maybe fate has it for you
;)
hugs

Monkey Man said...

By living and breathing, we are all playing with fate. Fate created my One Shot.

Steve Isaak said...

Beautifully stated, sublime at certain points, and certainly romantic. Masterful line breaks, masterful flow.

booguloo said...

Very Nice. Happy New Year!

moondustwriter said...

Love the double meaning. You play...

Also got caught in the dream sequence as that's where my poem went this time

Thanks for excellence shared with One Shot

Moonie smiles and Happy New Year

Wild Rose said...

Beautiful and so touching grammar in this piece queen..wishing you a happy new year and lots of love and kisses. Love you too darling and am always close to your heart even if i seem so far :)) xoxo

Yours,
Wild Rose~

Joop Zand said...

Hello Desert Rose

It's very nice, i like your blog, my compliments for it.

Best wishes for 2011.

greetings, Joop

Anonymous said...

happy new year.. be happy with whom u want be... God bless

Sumit Sarkar said...

Wonderful..
The ending is fantastic..

Happy New Year :)

dan roberson said...

You have to know when to hold and know when to fold. Enjoy the game,
letting your heart claim the winning hand.

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